ย 1. SubjectโVerb Agreement
โ People likes to spend time online.
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People like to spend time online.
๐ Rule: โPeopleโ is plural โ use โlike,โ not โlikes.โ
๐น 2. SingularโPlural Confusion
โ There are many problem in my city.
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There are many problems in my city.
๐ Rule: Use plural forms with many, several, a few, etc.
๐น 3. Using Uncountable Nouns Incorrectly
โ I have many informations about this topic.
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I have a lot of information about this topic.
๐ Rule: โInformation,โ โadvice,โ โfurniture,โ โhomeworkโ โ uncountable nouns (no s).
๐น 4. Missing Articles (a, an, the)
โ Government should provide better healthcare.
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The government should provide better healthcare.
๐ Rule: Use โtheโ when referring to a specific group or thing.
๐น 5. Repetition of Words
โ Nowadays technology is very important. Technology helps people in many ways. Technology is developing fast.
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Nowadays, technology plays a vital role in our lives and is rapidly advancing in many areas.
๐ Tip: Use synonyms or paraphrasing to avoid repetition โ e.g., innovation, digital tools, modern devices.
๐น 6. Informal Language
โ Kids are getting lazy because of phones.
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Children are becoming lazy because of smartphones.
๐ Rule: Avoid informal words like kids, stuff, a lot of, gonna, wanna, etc.
๐น 7. Wrong Word Forms
โ Government should encourage the develop of new industries.
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The government should encourage the development of new industries.
๐ Rule: Use the correct noun/verb/adjective form (develop โ development).
๐น 8. Overuse of Personal Pronouns
โ I think pollution is bad. I believe people should stop it. I feel it is dangerous.
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Pollution is a serious issue that needs urgent attention from the government and individuals.
๐ Tip: Minimize โI think / I believeโ โ make sentences more formal and academic.
๐น 9. Run-On Sentences (No Proper Punctuation)
โ People use cars it makes pollution and traffic problems.
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People use cars, which causes pollution and traffic problems.
๐ Rule: Use commas and linking words to join ideas properly.
๐น 10. Not Using Linking Words Properly
โ People use the internet. It is helpful. It is also harmful.
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People use the internet, which is both helpful and harmful.
๐ Tip: Use connectors like however, moreover, therefore, on the other hand, as a result.
๐น 11. Not Supporting Ideas with Examples
โ Education is important for everyone.
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Education is important for everyone, for example, it helps people get better jobs and improve their lives.
๐ Rule: Always give an example to support your idea (real or imaginary).
๐น 12. Wrong Tense Usage
โ In the future, people use electric cars.
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In the future, people will use electric cars.
๐ Rule: Match tense to time โ future = will + V1.
๐น 13. Missing Plural Verbs with Plural Nouns
โ Many people thinks that social media is harmful.
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Many people think that social media is harmful.
๐ Rule: Plural noun โ plural verb.
๐น 14. Overgeneralization
โ All young people are addicted to the internet.
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Many young people are addicted to the internet.
๐ Tip: Avoid all, everyone, always โ use many, most, some instead.
๐น 15. Short, Choppy Sentences
โ Technology is important. It helps people. It saves time.
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Technology is important because it helps people save time and work more efficiently.
๐ Rule: Join short sentences to show complex grammar (Band 7+).
๐น 16. Repeating the Question (No Paraphrasing)
โ The question says that travelling is popular today. I agree that travelling is popular today.
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Travelling has become increasingly common in modern times due to affordable transport and globalisation.
๐ Rule: Always paraphrase the question in your introduction.
๐น 17. Word Count Too Low
โ Essay only 220 words.
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Write 250โ280 words.
๐ Rule: Under-length essays lose marks in Task Response.
๐น 18. Missing Clear Opinion
โ There are advantages and disadvantages of online education.
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In my opinion, the advantages of online education outweigh the drawbacks.
๐ Rule: Always state your opinion clearly (Band 7+ requirement).
๐น 19. No Conclusion or Repeated Introduction
โ In conclusion, I agree with this statement.
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In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks, online education offers greater flexibility and access for learners worldwide.
๐ Rule: Conclusion = summary + opinion (no new idea).
๐น 20. Wrong Prepositions
โ Depend on to technology.
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Depend on technology.
๐ Rule: Learn fixed prepositions: depend on, focus on, interested in, responsible for.


